S
pelling.
"I will read my first paragraph and
check for spelling errors. I'll circle them and then check with
spell check. If I can't figure out the word from the spell check,
I'll try writing the word different ways to see what looks right.
If that doesn't work, I'll try the dictionary.The
word belief should be spelled b-e-l-i-e-v-e. The word
eatylogy should be spelled e-t-i-o-l-o-g-y. I used
the wrong spellings for there. It should be t-h-e-i-r. I
also used the wrong spelling for weather. It should be w-h-e-t-h-e-r.
The word ditorted should be d-i-s-t-o-r-t-e-d. Tighs
should be t-h-i-g-h-s. I used the wrong to. It should
be t-w-o. I reversed letters in wieghed. It should
be w-e-i-g-h-e-d."
| I belief (BELIEVE) that there are social
and psychological factors important in the eatylogy (ETIOLOGY)
of Eating Disorders. Researchers have said that eating disorders
from the demand on females to be thin. Forcing them to become
preoccupied with there (THEIR) weight. The tremendous societal
emphasis on thin being has led to an increase in the amount
of eating disorders. Many Researchers have looked into weather
(WHETHER) satisfaction with ones body is specific to eating
disorders. It does not seem to be! Young females with eating
disorders tend to display a high degree of body satisfaction.
Also Many of these women have a ditorted (DISTORTED) image
of the size of their waists tighs (THIGHS) and hips. A recent
study of more than to (TWO) thousand women that they wanted
to weigh about nine pounds less, than they actually wieghed
(WEIGHED). |
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C
apitalization.
"Now I'll read my paper and check for capitalization errors.
The word Eating Disorder should not be capitalized. The word Researcher
shouldn't be capitalized either. Same with the word Many."
| I believe that there are social
and psychological factors important in the etiology of Eating
Disorders (eating disorders). Researchers have said that eating
disorders from the demand on females to be thin. Forcing them
to become preoccupied with their weight. The tremendous societal
emphasis on thin being has led to an increase in the amount
of eating disorders. Many Researchers (researchers) have looked
into whether satisfaction with ones body is specific to eating
disorders. It does not seem to be! Young females with eating
disorders tend to display a high degree of body satisfaction.
Also Many (many) of these women have a distorted image of
the size of their waists thighs and hips. A recent study of
more than two thousand women that they wanted to weigh about
nine pounds less, than they actually weighed. |
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O
rder.
"Now
I'll read my paper aloud to make sure that the words are in the
correct order.I forgot the
word result in the second sentence. I reversed the words thin being.
I also forgot the word found in the last sentence."
| I believe that there are social
and psychological factors important in the etiology of eating
disorders. Researchers have said that eating disorders (RESULT)
from the demand on females to be thin. Forcing them to become
preoccupied with their weight. The tremendous societal emphasis
on thin being (BEING THIN) has led to an increase in the amount
of eating disorders. Many researchers have looked into whether
satisfaction with ones body is specific to eating disorders.
It does not seem to be! Young females with eating disorders
tend to display a high degree of body satisfaction. Also many
of these women have a distorted image of the size of their
waists thighs and hips. A recent study of more than two thousand
women (FOUND) that they wanted to weigh about nine pounds
less, than they actually weighed. |
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P
unctuation marks.
"I'll re-read my paper now to check
for punctuation errors.I forgot
to put an apostrophe in the word ones. I shouldn't use an exclamation
mark at the end of the sentence It does not seem to be! I should
put a comma after the word After. I also need to add commas after
the word waists and thighs. I need to remove the comma after the
word less in the last sentence."
| I believe that there are social
and psychological factors important in the etiology of eating
disorders. Researchers have said that eating disorders from
the demand on females to be thin. Forcing them to become preoccupied
with their weight. The tremendous societal emphasis on thin
being has led to an increase in the amount of eating disorders.
Many researchers have looked into whether satisfaction with
ones (one's) body is specific to eating disorders. It does
not seem to be! (. instead of !) Young females with eating
disorders tend to display a high degree of body satisfaction.
Also (,) many of these women have a distorted image of the
size of their waists (,) thighs (,) and hips. A recent study
of more than two thousand women that they wanted to weigh
about nine pounds less, (remove ,) than they actually weighed. |
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E xpress
a complete thought.
"Now for my last re-reading. I'll read aloud to make sure that
all the sentences are grammatically correct.I
found one incomplete sentence so I have to re-write it as a complete
thought."
| I believe that there are social and psychological
factors important in the etiology of eating disorders. Researchers
have said that eating disorders results from the demand on
females to be thin. Forcing them to become preoccupied with
their weight. (THIS FORCES THEM TO BECOME PREOCCUPIED WITH
THEIR WEIGHT). The tremendous societal emphasis on being thin
has led to an increase in the amount of eating disorders.
Many researchers have looked into whether satisfaction with
one's body is specific to eating disorders. It does not seem
to be. Young females with eating disorders tend to display
a high degree of body satisfaction. Also, many of these women
have a distorted image of the size of their waists, thighs,
and hips. A recent study of more than two thousand women that
they wanted to weigh about nine pounds less than they actually
weighed. |
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